LavitzSlambert's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[[Floating]]

not so bad

yea, it is relaxing, but a bit too long perhaps:that is whats makes it repetitive. Perhaps shorter and ending in a loop wouldve been better. Good work.

fosterCHILD16 responds:

hmm sounds like a good idea, ill come back to this song and rework it a little later, thanks for reviewing

peace
-fosterchild

[[Invasion] 2.0]

Bravo!

That's a lot better, the song makes more sense and the high pitch sound is much less deafening. I also like the fact that it's a bit faster than the previous version. That was the good part, for the bad part: Your outro (2:30 to end) was totally nowhere: the way ur main sound comes back just scraps the mood of the song. Also, the "burp" at the very end isn't cool or anything, I think the best way to finish your song would be with a fade out. Overall, that was a great progression and I'm looking forward to, perhaps, a 3.0! ^^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah im still iffy on the end, version 3 will be coming out some time in the near future, hopefully sooner than the gap between 1 and 2.......lol thanks for the review

peace
-fosterchild

[Club Epic]

Omg, wow..it's just..i love it..it's...wow

It's sad that the limit for rating is 10, even so, this song can't be rated since it's so good. ur best!^^

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

YAY ty for the awesome review! Yeah this is one of my best, but since i used a midi it's not as rewarding

[BattleGrounds]

*raves all night long*

I love it and it sounds rave enough to me! The robo voice u used is so cool too, I dunno know but i like the voice lol, awesome job!^^

Dj-UnKnOwN responds:

haha thanks, yeah i think the transition with the robo voice was so cool. But it was just the speech synthesizer in FL studio.
Thanks for the review
Dj-Unknown

[[Voyage]]

I liked the first part

The beginning was awesome, but afterwards there's something missing. I think instead of what u did , u could've used a techno or trance twist, like really soft and continue with that sound. afterwards, you could've add a bit of piano and it would've been perfect. Anyways, it's really soothing and u've reached ur goal:to make a calm song. Bravo!

fosterCHILD16 responds:

thanks, yeah i guess i could have, but then it would have lost the whole calming bit i was trying to get, anyway thanks for the input

peace
-fosterchild

[[Invasion]]

the dude bfore me said pretty much everything...

..but I'll add that the high pitch sounds at the begining could've been an intro, not the whole song, it gets pretty repetitive and since it's high tone, like Godknown said, it gets deafening. good work!^^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah i fixed it up and made it more technoey lol in version 2.0
thanks for the review

peace
-fosterchild

[[Burst]]

really nice, ur best!

That song...I think it should be in a puzzle game, not in a fighting game. The sounds aren't hardcore enough to be fighting style. the way I see it is that it helps concentrate, especially the first sound u used...delta waves, I think they're called, anyways, great work!

fosterCHILD16 responds:

sounds like a good idea, thanks for the review

peace
-fosterchild

[War of the Donut]

THE WAR OF THE...........donuts!?!?!?!?!?!

pretty good, i'd see that song in a war video games, as long as it's not called war of the donuts. You should work on your titles, lol. Other than that, even though it's classic..I like it!

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha i let my friend name this song..... guess i get what i paid for.....
well thanks for reviweing

peace
-fosterchild

[Wank Cannon]

Ur RIght!

it IS too happy, lol. It makes me think of a video game ending or sumthing like that. On the other side it IS well done though, good job!^^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha thanks

peace
-fosterchild

[Vicodin]

ok...

ya, welll...the song is not bad, BUT...the laser beam is really annoying and kinda high pitch to go with it. I think you should have chosen another type of sound like a synth or a bass....sumthing. good try though, keep improving!^^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

thanks for the input, i put up a new version of this song, its got a few minor changes but my friends all seem to like it a lot more

peace
-fosterchild