LavitzSlambert's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Breeze Of Reminiscence]

*closes eyes and lets himself flow with the music*

this is the PERFECT time for hearing such a song. I have a big exam week startting tomorrow and I need to unstress a bit ^^.

Thank you!

Jabicho responds:

Hehe it's cool to hear that, thanks man! hope you do great in your exams =D

[Everything.]

Great

This song has 2 essential good things: a good beat and good sounds. Like previously said, this song needs some equalizing, but I don't think it needs drastic changes.

-The bass, yes it's extremely low toned, but it gives a really nice effect (imagine this with giant subwoofers O_o), instead of rising it up, you could add another bass following the same melody but a bit higher pitched, not a lot, just a bit and it must sound harmonious together.

-The synth was perfect in my opinion

-the drums definitely need to be augmented though. From what I hear it sounds like a good beat, but we barely hear them. Again don't rise them to high as it gives the song a really nice effect, sort of mysterious.

This is my opinion, you should edit this song a bit, as I think it will be Deeeelicious if you do. You can do as you like, you can try what I proposed, but if after a couple of tries it sounds like crap, just forget about them lol.

Matches responds:

Haha, i'll try that, thanks for the adivce!

[march of the emporer]

not too bad

the song was pretty good, the beat a bit less. The hats were a bit annoying, perhaps toning them down a bit would be better. As for the tempo changes, they were XP GROSS. OMG don't ever do that to a song. It's way too sudden and TOTALLY RANDOM. If you want to do a change of tempo, at least do a transition to it, progressively change it for instance. Anyways, if you retouch the song. eliminate those tempo changes, tone the hats down a bit, add a bass and do a little variation in the beat near the end(like 1min, 1min 20). For the ending, you could end less suddenly also, like use a synth explosion or something(use your imagination :P). Overall, you could do something really great out of this, but it needs a few adjustements. Please come back with a new version of this song ^_- P

mikkim responds:

I wish i could change the beat but this is fine

[Golden Sun Battle RMX]

pretty good

alright this song is pretty good! It's simple yet you recognize very well the song. It sounds a lot like the original, yet it's different, modesty :). One thing I didn't like though is the length of the song. It's a bit too long, 3 times the same thing. What you could've done is do it once and end it in a loop, cuz it's pretty long and it makes it repetitive =/. Even if you don't want to make it a loop, cut it down a bit and it's perfect.

DJ-HappyFace responds:

Ok, fair enough. However, one thing that bugs me about songs that loop are intros. If I took your advice, I'd have to either
A - Make a seperate recording of the intro and use it once
or B - Figure out how if there is a program that can code the song to loop 2 seconds in (or whatever it is)

But thanks for the idea, I appreciate the feedback!

DJ-HappyFace :)

[Chrono Trigger - Schala Theme]

Memories, memories

I love that song, hearing that song made me wanna cry. Brings back the memories of when I was a wee bit high, playing that game T_T
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*goes play chrono trigger*

Jabicho responds:

Hehehe, I remember how I wanted that game so badly and went to see if it was available at the store like every one or two days =P thanks for your wonderful review =)

[{Battle}]

Sweet!

this is a fighting theme I'd see in a game like Devil May Cry or something like that, that type of game. And it really sounds like a fighting song, like I hear that and I would know there's a fight. Funny fact though is the beginning sounds like a 1970-1980 song is about to start LOL XD.

fosterCHILD16 responds:

haha yeah it really does at the beginning....totally didnt notice when i made it lol, to tell the truth i used devil may cry's battle music to give me an idea on how to make this
thanks for the review!

peace
-fosterchild

[{Danger}]

Nicely done!

Very very well done, it does give an impression that something's not right around here <.< ... >.> . Well, I guess it does that XD, horror stuff has no effect on me (I always find something funny in horror movies). Good work! ^-^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

yeah same with me.......its mildly dissappointing though, i sorta want to be scared by something completely random....haha as always thanks for reviewing! much appreciated!

peace
-fosterchild

[[Gyration] {v2}]

Hey, long time no see.

Know what? I actually had noticed you were gone. Noticed it had been a while without submitting new songs XD. For the song now, the beginning is really good. The sounds come in on a not too long regular basis. After the sound that comes in at approxemetly 1:30, it's starts to get repetitive there. But cheer up! they're is worse repetitiveness (is that even a word? XD). Overall, it was good, with a slight repetitivity (well this one is for sure). Rust hasn't gained you yet, so keep 'em coming ^_^.

-LavitzSlambert-

fosterCHILD16 responds:

really? haha well thanks for noticing! thanks! well if it wasnt before it is now haha, thats good to hear haha thanks for reviewing yet again! oh and i just put up the third version of this song, is quite a bit less repetitive haha

peace
-fosterchild

[[Foundry]]

kool

Yea, I agree with Godknown, It does sound like a game menu song. I'd totally put it in one of my games(even though I dont have any and a'm not going to do one anytime soon, but thats a detail). Pretty good work.

fosterCHILD16 responds:

well if you ever do use this in a game let me know haha thanks for the review

peace
-fosterchild

[[Emotion]]

Ya, ur improving

Pretty good man, but unlike Lamazar, I think the sound at 1:20 was kool. Its just a bit annoying: perhaps modifying it a bit would be better. But the best part is: Your getting drastically better on your outros, I have nothing to say about it, its just perfect. Keep up your improvement and good work! ^^

fosterCHILD16 responds:

alright ill look into it as soon as i can, im pretty swamped right now though, thanks for the review and suggestions

peace
-fosterchild