LavitzSlambert's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mythology]

Great video

I rly like this flash. I looks like a trailer you would use for an upcoming series *hinthint* loll. Kidding, you already have enough work on your hands XD

For those who are wondering what the song is. It's called Lux Aeterna, also known as Requiem For A Dream, by Clint Mansell. The most epic song on earth :D

[Telefrancais collab]

has it's moment...

It's a good collab, I can't say I found everything in the collab funny, but some parts were good, like the previously mentionned so many times "Deleted no.27". Perhaps I would've enjoyed it more if I knew what Téléfrançais was...

I may live in Canada, but this didn't air in the French Canadian province, Québec...

[Beat up Sandbag]

roflmao

watched it many times already and I still find it awesome and funny! Great work!

Btw, I think that "errr, some guy", the character Ludakris_ used, is Kaoru Koganei , from the anime "Flames of Recca" :) He uses the same weapon and is very similar to the sprite :3

[Porno for Parents]

omg rofl!!!!!

dude, that was freakin HILARIOUS! pmsl!

5 10 fav!

[LL-Biology]

not so bad

Being just a biology explanation, the animations don't need to be good, so I wont comment on that.

The information you spill in there is true, BUT said way too roughly. The explications are fast and not really developped. This is sorta complicated biology and especially is for those who didn't follow a cellular biology class.

To improve your flash and make it more interesting, here's what you could do:
-Give people the time to process the information, in other words, slow down.
-Give more in depths explanation, starting by the general information related to the specific information your are explaining (i.e., you could have explained a bit just what a mitochondria is.).
-Audio commentary could sure make this flash less boring to watch. It's for sure not a necessity, but it helps.

Overall, you could've made something very interesting to watch, something clear that gives answers, but you didn't give enough time to your project, sadly :(

drumsticklock responds:

haha, This was just homework for a biology class, i was trying to get the 500,000th submission, and this was the only passable thing i could find.

[Super Mario bros Z ep.7 (old series)]

'BOUT FREAKIN' TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!

Man, the wait for this episode was loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong, I was CRAVING for it! lol. They just keep getting better :P, awesome is the only, it's the best series of flahs that is on newgrounds ^_- P

[Super smash crash trailer]

yea, pretty cool

I have a question though: Are you going to make a game4 outta this or a movie? Cuz for a game, we have Mcleod who have already made one and is making another, yea. But it's always good to have different versions. Also get someone to check your texts before you finish your flash, lotsa mistakes. Looks promising in anyway, movie or game.

sonicmcbob responds:

well i'm trying o figure out how to make an RPG out of it but can't figure out how to

[Suna-sassin]

ok...

the animation was ok and all. But! it was dramatically too short and we're we actually suposed to be able to read the text, they appear for like a second or two! You need to work on that

[Shadow Legacy]

hmmhm

sounds interesting! Please do make it a serie. From this small preview, it looked like you could something really interesting with it. Looking forward to a future release! :D