LavitzSlambert's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Walking in the Desert]

intense

This song is intense in emotion, like your stranded in the desert and not just walking through it. Will I survive? the end of the song tells us yes, as it sounds more hopeful!

great work, yet again jabi,
-Lavitz

Jabicho responds:

Thanks so much Lavitz! im happy you enjoyed it

[Flying with the Wind]

sorry

hey Jabi, sorry I took so much time to come check out the second and third part.

I really like this piece, since it sounds just like the wind. It can be soothing and relaxing, like a breeze, but at the next instant it's racing and holding you back. Both an obstacle and a friend.

I can't help but feel this one since it's wind themed, it makes me remember as a kid, when I was frustrated or sad, I would go to the park, and go on the swing, swing a bit, close my eyes and feel the breeze, just to calm me down...

you move me yet again Jabi :O,
-Lavitz

Jabicho responds:

Hey there my friend! dont worry about the time, its great to find a comment from you :)
thanks for sharing that memory, I imagined it and loved it. Thanks again for listening, take care!

[Silver Surfer Harddance Remix]

pretty good for a song

yea, it's your first song, so I'll judge you accordingly.

Drums: way too much fade in/fade out. It just sounds a bit awkward that the kicks keep going out. Also, it'd be nice if you put more work in your beat. What you have is just a kick+snare. Try using cymbals.

Bass: hummm, absent? I heard a low back synth, but no bass. My bad, I hear one in the second part of the song. Just mind that the bass usually tends to be the same thoughout the song, much like the beat.

Synth: It's fine, although it doesn't sound like a harstyle synth, until halfway through, and this is one of the main problem of the song. Your buildup is too long, it feels like your song starts around 1:50 to 2:00, whichs is very long for a 3 and a half minute song.

Overall feel: Your intro to the song is good, although very long. Next, your main melody is also good. Your outro is way too sudden with just a cymbal crash. As for your transitions, some are fine, but others are very sudden, you need more then just a cymbal crash to transit. All in all, a good song with flaws, splendid first try at making a song :D

-Lavitz

P.S.: Dance includes vocals, thus your song should be classified as techno, or better hardstyle, but I doubt you can class a song hardstyle. I don't remember seeing hardstyle in the list...

LightNightD responds:

Wow. An eight?! Are you crazy?! Haha, thanks, but it''s not worth it...I made it over an year ago, when i just started working with fl studio xD But anyway's, there is still no final version, I think im going to work on it again, thanks for the nice review! Much appreciated! Thanks you!

[Shine On Silver Surfer! (NES)]

nice remix

It's a good remix, but there are some flaws, mainly in balancing .

Sometimes, one of the melodies is nearly entirely drowned by another/the others

Drums, might be a bit too loud, but otherwise I see no problems.

I doesn't sound as epic as the original, but it could've!

good job,
-Lavitz

[Stickerbush Symphony Orchestra]

nice

Well done MVS,

I've nothing to say about it. It's very well done.

-Lavitz

P.S.: It's funny that you released a video game song remix nearly the same date as I do lolll

MVSRemix responds:

Yeah but they're pretty much the only thing I do well.

[Dwelling at the Ocean's Bottom]

soooooooooooooooooooothing....

Step 1- close your eyes.

Step 2- Just let your imagination flow like the waves this song creates.

I feel like I'm on the calmest of beaches, on a sunny day, with nothing but some wind and the sound of waves, a paradise of calmness...

can't wait for the nest two parts ;P,
-Lav

Jabicho responds:

Thanks so much my friend! I'll submit them soon!

[Toma mi Mano esta Noche]

*drool*

Dude....dude!...I mean dude!

this was so beautiful, I can qualify it as Orgasmic!

I am not one that likes classical music much, but I love your work, seriously, you are one of the best artists on newgrounds!

you just keep surprising me Jabicho, you really do...
-Lavitz

Jabicho responds:

lol man thanks! ahaha orgasmic, it's cool to read that, thanks for listening!

[Labyrinth Of The Damned W/ Vox]

tight!

Man, this is shit is tight! why is it ranked so low???????????

This should be easily ranked over 4.00, it's sounds so professional!!

Although I too like the instrumental better, this is still uber awesome!

Just keep on headbangin'!,
Lavitz

Deathcalypse responds:

Thanks man. Techno-crazed fucksticks rated this down.

[Cursorized]

kool

hey, c'est pas mal! La mélodie est bonne, les drums eux aurait besoin d'un peu plus de travail par exemple, pis ya un long silence a la fin...>.>

De plus, c'est court, ça me donne l'impression que c'est un travail inachevé.

En somme, ca serait vraiment kool que tu reprenne le travail et que tu en fasse une version complète :3...si tu fait encore de la musique, c'est-à-dire...

-Lavitz

P.S.: pas rapport, mais dans quel coin t'habite cher compatriote? :3

[[Blast]]

yea!

Pretty sweet Foster,

you're becoming a master at this :P

Only weird thing I just heard is this weird transition at half of the song, it kinda broke the mood :(

Other then that, it's sah-weet.

P.S.: check out my new song :P

fosterCHILD16 responds:

hey

thanks man, yeah i HATE that transition but i havent gotten around to fixing it yet....

haha ill check it out now

-fosterCHILD